As she sat on the sofa,
sipping her green tea, she kept looking at the watch again and again. It didn’t
seem to tick any faster. She was looking forward to tonight. It had been a long
time since they’d spent a cosy evening together. His work tours had increased
lately. This time around, he had looked into her eyes and promised some good
memories after he got back. One of them was a movie date night today.
If mirrors were honest
indeed, the night ahead promised to be a romantic one with longing gazes. With
those trail of thoughts she smiled to herself, and that’s when he walked in.
Him: What a terrible week
this was!
Not a very promising opening
line.
Her: Oh honey! Take a quick
shower and lets step out, you’ll get all refreshed.
Him: Step out? I won’t take a
single step. Where do you wanna go anyways? I have a bad headache.
Her: You forgot? Today’s our
date night.
Him: Oh no! I mean no, I
didn’t forget. I’ve just lost track of time with these work hours getting
crazier. But baby, can we please do it tomorrow?
Her: Okay. If you can’t do
it, you just can’t, can you?
The hope was that the sad
expression and the soft tone might draw his attention; her pretty face and gorgeous
frame would change his mood, and all the efforts would pay off.
Him: No, I can’t.
He started walking towards
the shower-room but stopped abruptly. Her face lit up.
Him: Are we out of soap? I
just barely managed to scrub myself with that small piece you left for me.
Her: I’ve replaced it.
And he was gone, just like
that. Not even a second glance.
Just when she was about to label
her man as the typical husband, he surprised her next morning with breakfast in
bed.
Him: Good morning. I shall
make it up to you today. You pick the movie, you choose the restaurant. I’ll be
there, with bells on. No questions asked.
But even before she could say
something, he went on.
Him: Can I just make a
suggestion though? How about ‘Paranormal Activity’?
Her: Activity causing sleepless
nights, no way. How about ‘Room’?
Him: I’d prefer my bedroom. Okay,
‘Anomaly’?
Her: Sci-Fi? Are you nuts!
There’s a reason I didn’t pursue the Science stream in college. ‘Sleeping With
Other People’?
Him: What! Why! How!
Her: How? What kind of a
question is that Silly, that’s a movie title.
Him: Haha...You got me! Look,
you’ve already gone ahead and seen all the blockbusters. I had to dig out these
names!
Her: You stay away, you don’t
spend time with me and why do I get the punishment!
Him: How about ’99 Homes’?
It’s a thriller.
Her: Are you even listening
to me? And anyway, wasn’t the movie supposed to be my choice?
Him: Yeah! But if you plan on
putting me to sleep, why pay money for it? I’ll just lie down in the
bedroom..hehe.
When his joke wasn’t well received,
he straightened his face.
Him: Okay, how about ‘The
Final Girls’?
Her: Now you want us to see ‘those’
kinda movies?
Him: No!! It’s a horror
movie!
He took a pause and appeared
like he was seriously pondering over something.
Him: Wait, you didn’t sound
angry. That means you have no objection to ‘those’ movies!
Her: Buzz off!
Him: I have a brilliant
suggestion! How about I buzz off with my friend and you with yours.
The stern look meant that he
was supposed to elaborate and he very naively did.
Him: Lets walk into the
theatre together and then head to different movies with our respective friends!
What say? Am I smart or what?
He didn’t realise that the
idea was not even close to the acceptable category, until the bedroom door was
slammed into his face.
Outside the theatre a few
hours later, he looked all refreshed and she clearly upset as they walked out
of the movie together.
Her: Why did you have to
embarrass me?
Him: (yawning) What did I do?
Her: You very well know what
you did. You just want to get back at me all the time.
Him: We saw a movie of your
choice, what more do you want?
Her: We? We? The aunty seated
next to you would beg to differ. She jumped off her seat when your head landed on
her shoulder!
Him: There you go, I had
promised you memories. Now would you ever forget that?
PS. Memories indeed! Happens
to all of us. And even if we fume over them then, these small
incidents do make long-lasting memories; putting a smile on the face on a
gloomy day.
26 comments:
Quite an intriguing fiction Leena. :) I was enthralled by all the sequences of the story. You have executed it very well. Hats off
hahahha good one there. The most upsetting incidents always make for the best posts !
How I wish these were experiences Sujata! I haven't a seen a movie with hubby in many years now :(
Tis all my imagination :)...short stories about a fictional couple I've created and enjoy writing about.
Thanks Maitreni, I'm glad you liked it :)
Hey, love the last line and of course the narration on complexity of relationship. I guess with life taking a toll, we get less time for ourselves and time to breathe and stop for a while for a brand new perspective and rekindle romance.
Memories good or bad do stay with us. For me it reflects our past and shapes the future. Though fictional, many couples would surely agree with it. It may have or will happen for them atleast once in their lifetime. Good one.
Thanks Vishal! Yep, like you said, one has to take conscious efforts to keep rekindling the romance buddy :)
Thanks dear Sumeet! Its always fun to weave stories around this fictional couple of mine. I'm sure there would be couples who would be able to relate to these fun stories :)
Tightly woven keeping the reader engrossed!!
Very nice and interesting post here. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Rimanere..will surely check out your blog!
Thanks Deepak! Glad you liked it :)
Pleasure is mine Jamshed, thanks for stopping by!
Thanks for the compliment Manu!
Yes couldn't stop till the last line.
Great writing.
I guess we can all relate to bits and parts of this story. ;)
Date night! Gosh! it's been so long since the last one. Hmmm :D
Nice one, Leena. :)
Thanks Indrani dear, for your sweet words :)
Hehe Divya, been there done that for all of us ;-)
What a nicely written piece! For a moment, I was like this guy doesn't even care and then you turned it around :) Sweet!
I am surprised the debate went so long.Any normal husband would have flared up sooner.It is then ,that i stopped suspecting him.
Nice story Leena.
Nah, I could never make HIM a heartless guy! He is typical in some sense but not so typical in others, I love this character :)
Glad you like it Parul dear!
Thanks Indu, really appreciate :)
Nice story... I can't write fiction good enough somehow :(
Thanks Shoma! You are good at what you write dear :)
Huh, quite an interesting conversation that was. I was looking for a rosy night for them, in the bed :)
Hmmm buddy, interesting :)
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